Friday, 30 November 2012

pitch




28/11/2012 - Today we altered our previous idea for our pitch due to the reason that we discovered the idea was very similar to Britney Spears' song 'Baby, One More Time'. Instead we came up with the idea of contrasting the loud attitude of the protagonist with a quiet/sad setting.


Our Finalized idea is this;

The protagonist will be on a date with her boyfriend and catch him flirting with an older woman on a different table.

Then it will cut to a different date where he repeats the flirtatious behavior with a different woman and doesn't pay any attention to her. This is when she begins to sing the lyrics.

She storms off and he follows.

The protagonist will take her boyfriend home and begin to 'play fight' with him, which escalates into her killing him by hitting him around the head with a giant lollipop.

She then goes upstairs to get ready for an occasion that is not yet revealed.

Cut scene to snap shots of the funeral.

The protagonist is walking (whilst singing) in a field with the band and ends up at some kind of gathering.

Close ups of the girls mourning to reveal they are the girls he had been flirting with.

Cut scene of the protagonist replacing his ashes with the sherbet.

She acts sweetly-evil to the girls by giving them sherbet.
The camera moves back to reveal the occasion is her boyfriend's funeral.

It then ends with the protagonist licking her lips

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